Sunday, June 10, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

More Six Sentence Sunday!This time, something from Lauren Gallagher.  The opening lines of All The King's Horses:

I didn’t go to my husband’s funeral.
It was a closed-casket service, so there’d be no closure from seeing him one last time. I didn’t care to see him again anyway, closure or no. All the tearful sentiments—he was so young, it was so tragic, he was such a wonderful man—would have sent me right into the ground with him. I couldn’t stomach the thought of one more person patting my shoulder and telling me how sorry they were, how horrible it must be for me, and to call if I needed anything at all.
The day before they buried Sam, I quietly packed whatever I couldn’t live without into my truck.  The next morning, around the time family and friends were probably all dressed in black and filing into the church, I climbed into the cab and drove out of town without looking back.
Want to play along? It’s fun and easy!
1. pick a project – a current WIP, contracted work or even something readers can buy if you’re published
2. pick six sentences
3. post ‘em on your blog or website on Sunday

4 comments:

  1. Interesting way to deal with a funeral. Makes me wonder what kind of husband he had been...
    Great six!

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  2. Very well-written. I hate funerals too.

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  3. What an amazing opening! So many questions put into the readers mind and a great glimpse into the heroine's personality. Well done six.

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  4. Perfectly captures my feeling about funerals. Great six.

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