Saturday, July 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Six Sentence Sunday strikes again...

This week, from L. A. Witt, six sentences from my recently released erotic suspense novel, Trust Me, which is the sequel to Cover Me:

The club was swankier than most places in this area. It was a known hangout for dealers, pimps, and anyone else who could afford a velvet-rope night in this chain link and razor wire neighborhood. Above the tables, top shelf liquor flowed. Below it, stacks of bills and bags of white powder changed hands. With the right combination of cash and a wink, a waitress could be compelled to meet a customer in the restroom or the alley behind the club. The place was all dressed up and pretty, but that illusion was only skin deep.

Want to play along? It’s fun and easy!
1. pick a project – a current WIP, contracted work or even something readers can buy if you’re published
2. pick six sentences
3. post ‘em on Sunday

13 comments:

  1. Doesn't sound like a place I'd want to visit. Nice description.

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  2. I love the illusions only being skin deep, makes it sound like a down right dirty establishment quickly. Great six.

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  3. Lovely descrip! I got a perfect feel for walking in this place.

    ~Xakara
    Dawn's Early Light 6SS

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  4. Beautiful way to describe the patina of class.

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  5. I agree with Jessica. Sounds like the place I'd avoid. Great description. You made it real.

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  6. Wow, this was really good. You gave a very vivid picture and feel to the club... especially loved the last line!

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  7. You paint a very vivid picture. Nicely done!

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  8. Nicely-written. There's a lot of places like that around, sadly. Great snippet!

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  9. Nice description, definitely set the scene...wonder what dangerous activities are about to take place here? I'm intrigued for sure.

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  10. Love the way you describe the place. Sounds like a fun hangout.

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  11. Great description of the setting. You gave lots of information in those six sentences, so we know what your characters are walking into!

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  12. Love the voice and description in this.

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