Saturday, October 8, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Where There's Smoke

It's already Sunday again, which means it's time for more Six Sentence Sunday ...

This week marks my last Sunday six posted from Japan, as next week I will be leaving The Land of the Rising Sun for the Land of the Falling Rain, where I will spend two months before continuing to Nebraska.

So, one last nibble of my current work-in-progress, Where There's Smoke, before I jet off to Seattle:

“You are aware you’re a predator, right?” Ranya gestured at her eyes. “Forward-facing eyes? Teeth meant for cutting?”

“You’re talking to a man who buys cigarettes on his way to a health food store,” I said. “I assure you, what nature intended and what Anthony does are not always in synch.”

Want to play along? It’s fun and easy!
1. pick a project – a current WIP, contracted work or even something readers can buy if you’re published
2. pick six sentences
3. post ‘em on Sunday

7 comments:

  1. Fantastic work, You weaved a great sense of rhythm into the reading. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

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  2. Really like the dialogue here. :-)

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  3. Details like Rayna gesturing to her eyes is what makes your writing so engrossing and realistic. Great six. :)

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  4. Great dialogue that also gives us a glimpse of your character's attributes. Good job!

    J.C.

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  5. Ha, I loved this. Excellent six!

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