This week marks my last Sunday six posted from Japan, as next week I will be leaving The Land of the Rising Sun for the Land of the Falling Rain, where I will spend two months before continuing to Nebraska.
So, one last nibble of my current work-in-progress, Where There's Smoke, before I jet off to Seattle:
Want to play along? It’s fun and easy!
“You are aware you’re a predator, right?” Ranya gestured at her eyes. “Forward-facing eyes? Teeth meant for cutting?”
“You’re talking to a man who buys cigarettes on his way to a health food store,” I said. “I assure you, what nature intended and what Anthony does are not always in synch.”
1. pick a project – a current WIP, contracted work or even something readers can buy if you’re published
2. pick six sentences
3. post ‘em on Sunday
LOL. Love it. Great dialogue.
ReplyDeleteFantastic work, You weaved a great sense of rhythm into the reading. Thoroughly enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteLOL! I like him!
ReplyDeleteReally like the dialogue here. :-)
ReplyDeleteDetails like Rayna gesturing to her eyes is what makes your writing so engrossing and realistic. Great six. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat dialogue that also gives us a glimpse of your character's attributes. Good job!
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Ha, I loved this. Excellent six!
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